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Saturday, November 5, 2011

Show Me Don't Tell Me

Though Halloween has passed us by... Take a stab at using your senses to help the following boring quotes come to life!  Remember to help me visualize the scenario rather then tell me about it. 

  1. When she walked through the graveyard she was scared.
  2. We carved the jack-o-lantern. It was gross inside.
  3. With seconds remaining he caught the game winning touchdown and the crowd cheered.
  4. The student was nervous for the big exam.
  5. It was cold outside.

MARS Report for the week of November 7th

This week... be sure to post one post on your current independent reading book and one comment on a classmates.    Be sure to copy and paste your responses into a word document that you save.  That way when I audit you to grade your posts... it is all set and ready to go!